| Re: Never Better by casey |
9-May-03/6:53 AM |
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| Re: a comment on lost (short) by sir_heff |
9-May-03/6:18 AM |
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| Re: a comment on lost (short) by sir_heff |
8-May-03/8:34 AM |
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i thouhgt of this as a lyric to a techno song, so it would repeat many times.......
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| Re: a comment on Poems of Love by BleedingRose |
29-Apr-03/9:33 AM |
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you sound like more of an idiot everytime i see you post
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| Re: The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose |
24-Apr-03/7:12 AM |
not as good as your other ones, at least in my opinion.
still not bad, and mostly better than mine.... bastard
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| Re: Household Sex Agents (tooles) by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
23-Apr-03/8:53 AM |
many improtant lessons in this..... very good
10
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| Re: "Life can sure be a motherfucker." by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
23-Apr-03/8:48 AM |
very moving, i really like the last part about quoting your self befor you get to say anything :)
when sobrioty blows...
smoke a bowl.
when reailty nocks....
turn your locks.
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| Re: a comment on Truth in Lies by BleedingRose |
23-Apr-03/8:40 AM |
ummm....... i dont really rember what i put....
anyway, its damn good, i have had that idea on the tip of my brain for a wile now, just havent found the words.....
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| Re: a comment on glazed point of view by sir_heff |
23-Apr-03/8:22 AM |
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just playin' i always pass it ;}
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| Re: ForMyFriend, Joneel by Luv2write |
22-Apr-03/9:40 AM |
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not your best work. good though
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| Re: Life by Luv2write |
22-Apr-03/9:37 AM |
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i see where your comming from. needs more style
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| Re: Lost by Luv2write |
22-Apr-03/9:33 AM |
very good!
oh and btw, if you find my sanity wile your lost, try to rember where you saw it. i've been looking for it for years.......i wonder where it went......
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| Re: Understand by Luv2write |
22-Apr-03/9:23 AM |
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i think you should revise the last 3 lines
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| Re: What do you see by Luv2write |
22-Apr-03/9:21 AM |
i feel like that all the time.
and your probly "worthy" of more than you think
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| Re: Poems of Love by BleedingRose |
22-Apr-03/8:42 AM |
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i love line 17 thats good shit!
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| Re: Changes by CHRMEcountryGRL |
22-Apr-03/8:38 AM |
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| Re: Trespasser at the Men's Bathing Pond by Christof |
23-Jan-03/10:17 AM |
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i wish i could wright like that 10.....
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| Re: a comment on extacy by sir_heff |
18-Jan-03/11:05 PM |
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| Re: a comment on beat myself with a stick by sir_heff |
17-Jan-03/8:30 PM |
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thats what i wrote it for :)
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| Re: Formerly known as life by KYLE |
17-Jan-03/7:20 AM |
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