poemranker ::ForMyFriend, Joneel by Luv2write

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ForMyFriend, Joneel

Member since 2003 · Posted 31 Mar 2003 · 5 comments

I'm sorry that I lied to you I know that it was wrong But I wanted to show you how much I cared Wanted to tell you for so long I'm sorry that I hid the truth My real identity But I was too afraid to come And face reality I just did it cause I loved you And wanted you to know That you'll remain forever in my heart Wherever I may go And now I feel so immature Writing down these words And I know that this must be The worst you've ever heard But I'm sorry that I lied to you And hid from you the truth I confess to you my dearest friend I did it cause I loved you

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5 comments

[n/a] Caducus 1-Apr-03/5:50 AM Reply
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[n/a] Christof 1-Apr-03/7:27 AM Reply
I think this might be better off just being sent to Joneel
[5] GekoHawaii 21-Apr-03/7:13 PM Reply
Jomegan?...

The meter needs a little work...but the idea and rhyme are good.
[n/a] Luv2write › GekoHawaii 22-Apr-03/12:37 PM Reply
Jomama... jk. Try Melest. Think about it...
[6] sir_heff 22-Apr-03/9:40 AM Reply
not your best work. good though