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ForMyFriend, Joneel (Lyric) by Luv2write I'm sorry that I lied to you
I know that it was wrong
But I wanted to show you how much I cared
Wanted to tell you for so long
I'm sorry that I hid the truth
My real identity
But I was too afraid to come
And face reality
I just did it cause I loved you
And wanted you to know
That you'll remain forever in my heart
Wherever I may go
And now I feel so immature
Writing down these words
And I know that this must be
The worst you've ever heard
But I'm sorry that I lied to you
And hid from you the truth
I confess to you my dearest friend
I did it cause I loved you
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A teenager's thoughts on Waking up.
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Posted: March 31, 2003 6:45 PM PST; Last modified: March 31, 2003 6:45 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0896473 Overall Rank: 6206 Comments:
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Caducus @ 62.105.88.10
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1-Apr-03/5:50 AM
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letterranker.com
I think this might be better off just being sent to Joneel
Jomegan?...
The meter needs a little work...but the idea and rhyme are good.
Jomama... jk. Try Melest. Think about it...
not your best work. good though
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