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ForMyFriend, Joneel (Lyric) by Luv2write

I'm sorry that I lied to you I know that it was wrong But I wanted to show you how much I cared Wanted to tell you for so long I'm sorry that I hid the truth My real identity But I was too afraid to come And face reality I just did it cause I loved you And wanted you to know That you'll remain forever in my heart Wherever I may go And now I feel so immature Writing down these words And I know that this must be The worst you've ever heard But I'm sorry that I lied to you And hid from you the truth I confess to you my dearest friend I did it cause I loved you

GekoHawaii 21-Apr-03/7:13 PM
Jomegan?...

The meter needs a little work...but the idea and rhyme are good.




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