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glazed point of view (Free verse) by sir_heff
I smoke a bowl, to pay the toll That takes me down this dusty road. My brain is fried, crumbled and dried It’s covered with resin but damn I'm high. I Roll up a jibber, and smoke on it hither My high gets bigger, as you call for it thither. But I ant goanna pass it, are you high on acid? If you wanna get plastered, then roll your own, bastard Pack up the bong, just like cheech and chong. We’ll smoke all night long, get lost in the fog I’m stoned with a twitch, in a time we will switch Need to get me a bitch, I can get stoned with.

Up the ladder: this bitter heart
Down the ladder: Arousing Love

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.142858
Weighted score: 5.8452444
Overall Rank: 1584
Posted: April 22, 2003 8:34 AM PDT; Last modified: April 22, 2003 8:34 AM PDT
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Comments:
[10] deleted user @ 64.12.96.237 | 22-Apr-03/6:19 PM | Reply
i luv it
[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 | 22-Apr-03/7:46 PM | Reply
spoken like somebody whose been tokin, but do why can't you pass that shit? Cause the bunny wants a hit! -9-
[n/a] sir_heff @ 65.172.117.1 > thepinkbunnyofdoom | 23-Apr-03/8:22 AM | Reply
just playin' i always pass it ;}
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