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Formerly known as life (Free verse) by KYLE
Must there be such tragedy in a world so full of thieves. The convicts walk and the stalkers stalk but the men are down on there knees. No mercy is given but hate is taken. Must there be such tragedy in the land that?s so ?Free?. What mine is yours but yours I can never borrow. The biggest mistake was the one that stated every man is equaly created. For we know that even in the snow when one cannot see we always find something wrong. To whine and complain I begin to go insane. I wonder who?s to blame for these heinous crimes, none other than our own pessimistic minds. So when these cruel finds can no longer be tolerated you your self will be the one hated. That?s why what?s stated should be uncreated and completely eradicated.

Up the ladder: Hidden
Down the ladder: Only the lowest lows

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12121
Posted: January 16, 2003 7:07 PM PST; Last modified: January 16, 2003 7:08 PM PST
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[7] sir_heff @ 65.172.117.1 | 17-Jan-03/7:20 AM | Reply
not bad
[0] fuzzylogic @ 172.164.56.104 | 3-Mar-04/11:20 PM | Reply
???????? help i need sombody help ???? hummm maybe next time use the revise button, just a suggestion
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