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Formerly known as life (Free verse) by KYLE
Must there be such tragedy in a world so full of thieves.
The convicts walk and the stalkers stalk but the men are
down on there knees. No mercy is given but hate is taken.
Must there be such tragedy in the land that?s so ?Free?.
What mine is yours but yours I can never borrow. The
biggest mistake was the one that stated every man is
equaly created. For we know that even in the snow when one
cannot see we always find something wrong. To whine and
complain I begin to go insane. I wonder who?s to blame for
these heinous crimes, none other than our own pessimistic
minds. So when these cruel finds can no longer be
tolerated you your self will be the one hated. That?s why
what?s stated should be uncreated and completely
eradicated.
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12121
Posted: January 16, 2003 7:07 PM PST; Last modified: January 16, 2003 7:08 PM PST
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