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Only the lowest lows (Free verse) by Crakyamuni One moment I'm not, asking the truth only of what keeps me trapped
morals are on time out "groper in full effect"
human rights are splattered on the sidewalk
reefer madness has insued
in the wake a child gawks in envy or angst
realizing, Ignorance "is" bliss
and our future paradise
Up the ladder:
Formerly known as life
Down the ladder:
Melancholy Tale
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Posted: January 19, 2003 2:25 PM PST; Last modified: January 19, 2003 2:25 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.6821256 Overall Rank: 12122 Comments:
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wOrnella Mutiw @ 198.81.26.167
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19-Jan-03/3:34 PM
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You've been reading too much of "The Art of Happiness" by his holiness the one only budamonk, Dalai Lama. For that and for being a weed wacker you get a 7. Why is there so much spacing bn. the last line? Looks and reads awkward.
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