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Only the lowest lows (Free verse) by Crakyamuni

One moment I'm not, asking the truth only of what keeps me trapped morals are on time out "groper in full effect" human rights are splattered on the sidewalk reefer madness has insued in the wake a child gawks in envy or angst realizing, Ignorance "is" bliss and our future paradise

Ornella Muti 19-Jan-03/3:34 PM
You've been reading too much of "The Art of Happiness" by his holiness the one only budamonk, Dalai Lama. For that and for being a weed wacker you get a 7. Why is there so much spacing bn. the last line? Looks and reads awkward.




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