| Re: Me helping Me by ThoughtfulSoul |
29-Sep-04/5:43 AM |
you know i swere that exact thought process has gone through my head before, compleate with spelling mistakes. and i just found out that they tend to say yes more often than no, but i think there just trying to be nice, witch is fucked up, cant they just be truthfull? fuck it... anyway -10-
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| Re: Ghost by Caducus |
24-Sep-04/8:15 AM |
i love lines 12 and 13, thats great.
gave ya an 8 cause the end is kinda out of place
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| Re: Openings by sir_heff |
10-Sep-04/8:40 AM |
i wrote this with my g/f, she wrote the first line, i did the second and so on...
she thinks i f*cked the ending up...
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| Re: The invisible man by Hostileintent |
14-Aug-03/11:50 AM |
hey thats like a discription of how i felt in highschool.... ahh the good old..... well the old days anyway. hehe
its good, one of your best, if not the best
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| Re: a comment on 'Where I come from- S.M.C!!' by Hostileintent |
14-Aug-03/11:43 AM |
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i agree, i was really liking it up intill the point that i couldnt read it any more, and while it still rhymed and sounded cool, i had no clue what you where saying....
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| Re: Incomplete by Hostileintent |
14-Aug-03/11:39 AM |
hummm interisting, kinda hard to fallow, but its pretty good.
8
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| Re: Memory by Hostileintent |
14-Aug-03/11:35 AM |
I like it. espetialy the last line of the 4th stanza.
good message 10
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| Re: Memory by Hostileintent |
14-Aug-03/11:35 AM |
I like it. espetialy the last line of the 4th stanza.
good message 10
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| Re: Memory by Hostileintent |
14-Aug-03/11:34 AM |
I like it. espetialy the last line of the 4th stanza.
good message
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| Re: letting off angry emotions by LosT SykoPath |
6-Aug-03/7:16 AM |
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hey man i know how it is, just dont kill me..... :)-9
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| Re: sorry, but i am lame by nolan |
4-Jun-03/6:23 AM |
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that was good -8- not near as lame as i was expciting
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| Re: sorry, but i am lame by nolan |
4-Jun-03/6:23 AM |
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that was good -8- not near as lame as i was expciting
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| Re: Techno Whore by hotwire |
3-Jun-03/6:19 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Lonely Soul by sir_heff |
2-Jun-03/12:17 PM |
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| Re: Afraid to love you by lil cindy lu who |
30-May-03/11:23 AM |
i love it
found my self singing along :) -9-
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| Re: Twilight's Sweet Embrace by kassanna |
30-May-03/11:22 AM |
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| Re: Plastic Posies by BleedingRose |
29-May-03/5:57 AM |
very nice, i should get my girlfriend some plastic posies.....oh wait i dont have one...
anyway, damn good poem.
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| Re: a comment on Poems of Love by BleedingRose |
13-May-03/6:34 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Done with all the mess by ILoveUandHim |
13-May-03/6:31 AM |
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ya you could say "That's a promise motherfucker, not a god-damn lie" that would prolly make you feel better to
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| Re: a comment on lost (short) by sir_heff |
10-May-03/9:39 PM |
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where do you think i got 28?
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