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Done with all the mess

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 May 2003 · 2 comments

No more regretful nights with gin, I'm sick of all the sin. Running my make-up when I cry, asking myself just why. Lord,I'm starting over.Amen, my heart is one to win. Just anyone won't satisfy, I want the perfect guy. I'm leaving my eyes wide open, filtering through the men. I will find him before I die, Thats a promise, no lie.

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[7] Jeremi B. Handrinos 12-May-03/10:10 PM Reply
What if you said "that's a promise motherfucker" don't you feel that would be more poignant?
[n/a] sir_heff › Jeremi B. Handrinos 13-May-03/6:31 AM Reply
ya you could say "That's a promise motherfucker, not a god-damn lie" that would prolly make you feel better to