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Done with all the mess (Lyric) by ILoveUandHim
No more regretful nights with gin, I'm sick of all the sin. Running my make-up when I cry, asking myself just why. Lord,I'm starting over.Amen, my heart is one to win. Just anyone won't satisfy, I want the perfect guy. I'm leaving my eyes wide open, filtering through the men. I will find him before I die, Thats a promise, no lie.

Up the ladder: post hate crime
Down the ladder: Dreadfully Open

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12141
Posted: May 12, 2003 9:19 PM PDT; Last modified: May 12, 2003 9:19 PM PDT
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[7] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-May-03/10:10 PM | Reply
What if you said "that's a promise motherfucker" don't you feel that would be more poignant?
[n/a] sir_heff @ 65.172.117.1 > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 13-May-03/6:31 AM | Reply
ya you could say "That's a promise motherfucker, not a god-damn lie" that would prolly make you feel better to
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