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Done with all the mess (Lyric) by ILoveUandHim

No more regretful nights with gin, I'm sick of all the sin. Running my make-up when I cry, asking myself just why. Lord,I'm starting over.Amen, my heart is one to win. Just anyone won't satisfy, I want the perfect guy. I'm leaving my eyes wide open, filtering through the men. I will find him before I die, Thats a promise, no lie.

Jeremi B. Handrinos 12-May-03/10:10 PM
What if you said "that's a promise motherfucker" don't you feel that would be more poignant?




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