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Dreadfully Open (Lyric) by pacleves Sight is changing like colored glass
As the seasons flipping quickly pass,
Things once ugly no anew
Boiled in a continuous brew.
Sickness is scraping my heart away.
Mother, tell me I am brave,
Show me the way along the maze.
Darkness dripping in a haze
Light of hope was never looked as grand
As from the hole in which I stand.
Up the ladder:
Done with all the mess
Down the ladder:
The Alluring Nightmare
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Posted: May 18, 2003 10:43 AM PDT; Last modified: May 18, 2003 10:43 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.6821256 Overall Rank: 12143 81 view(s)
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