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Dreadfully Open (Lyric) by pacleves
Sight is changing like colored glass As the seasons flipping quickly pass, Things once ugly no anew Boiled in a continuous brew. Sickness is scraping my heart away. Mother, tell me I am brave, Show me the way along the maze. Darkness dripping in a haze Light of hope was never looked as grand As from the hole in which I stand.

Up the ladder: Done with all the mess
Down the ladder: The Alluring Nightmare

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12142
Posted: May 18, 2003 10:43 AM PDT; Last modified: May 18, 2003 10:43 AM PDT
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