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Me helping Me (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul
Am I shaking I can't tell She's coming right towards me What do I say? All man I can't feel my legs I wonder if I look nervous Maybe this isn't the time to talk to her She is probably busy anyway All man she is getting closer Walk away, Dammit I can't move I'm paralyzed with fear and nervousness Okay, stay calm and don't stumble over your words Just think positively Your a great guy You can do it But what if she rejects me I know its not the end of the world But is that suppose to make me feel better I'll still feel like a loser Then it's decided run away And don't look back It will save you the time of looking like an ass Good thinking, not trying is way better than rejection Plus she would have said no anyway Well that's that Maybe one day it will be different But for today I'll stick to just talking to myself He hasn't guided me wrong yet

Up the ladder: That Summer
Down the ladder: Depression

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6404
Posted: September 27, 2004 5:38 PM PDT; Last modified: October 17, 2004 10:09 AM PDT
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[6] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.116.70 | 27-Sep-04/6:10 PM | Reply
Pull a movie reversal on her. Walk up, slap her across the face,(don't knock her teeth out or anything) then kiss her.



Make sure she doesn't have a boyfriend first.
[10] sir_heff @ 65.172.117.1 | 29-Sep-04/5:43 AM | Reply
you know i swere that exact thought process has gone through my head before, compleate with spelling mistakes. and i just found out that they tend to say yes more often than no, but i think there just trying to be nice, witch is fucked up, cant they just be truthfull? fuck it... anyway -10-
[n/a] Fear of Garbage @ 67.39.1.26 | 18-Oct-04/12:43 PM | Reply
you ripped this page right out of your diary didn't you
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