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Poems of Love (Free verse) by BleedingRose Poems of Love, I hate them the most.
As much substance and meaning and weight as a ghost.
They never can say,
What I feel, in MY way,
Thats why Poems of Love, I hate them the most.
Up the ladder:
Ode to a cock muncher
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Dildo (formerly titled "It")
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Posted: April 22, 2003 8:36 AM PDT; Last modified: October 13, 2004 10:08 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.537883 Overall Rank: 2502 Comments:
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sir_heff @ 65.172.117.1
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22-Apr-03/8:42 AM
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i love line 17 thats good shit!
Would you like to hear a true story? Once upon a time I bought these water balloons. I filled one of the water balloons up with some water that I got from this tap so that it became really bulbous because it had loads of tap water in it. It felt really squishy and blobby and organic. So I got some lotion and balmilised it. Then I sat there stroking it and saying the words "mmm yes, it's a good breed".
Did you give it a name? NEways, Im not quite sure what the relavence to the poem is ... well frankly i have no friggin clue... but thx, i guess. oh and umm Vote for me!
you sound like more of an idiot everytime i see you post
what's the matter bean boy? got too many beans on your bean?
ummm ya......
I have decided upon re-reading my own work that the main portion of this item was designed merely as a prolongment of my true message.
As this goes against my belief in the truest qualities of communication, I have left only the portion that has ever had real meaning.
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thats why i hate most poems of love better flow, good blast of words
um, it wouldnt rhyme(sp?)
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