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Poems of Love

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 Apr 2003 · Edited 13 Oct 2004 · 9 comments

Poems of Love, I hate them the most. As much substance and meaning and weight as a ghost. They never can say, What I feel, in MY way, Thats why Poems of Love, I hate them the most.

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[8] sir_heff 22-Apr-03/8:42 AM Reply

i love line 17 thats good shit!

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 27-Apr-03/3:38 AM Reply

Would you like to hear a true story? Once upon a time I bought these water balloons. I filled one of the water balloons up with some water that I got from this tap so that it became really bulbous because it had loads of tap water in it. It felt really squishy and blobby and organic. So I got some lotion and balmilised it. Then I sat there stroking it and saying the words "mmm yes, it's a good breed".

[n/a] BleedingRose › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 27-Apr-03/11:33 AM Reply

Did you give it a name? NEways, Im not quite sure what the relavence to the poem is ... well frankly i have no friggin clue... but thx, i guess. oh and umm Vote for me!

[8] sir_heff › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 29-Apr-03/9:33 AM Reply

you sound like more of an idiot everytime i see you post

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › sir_heff 29-Apr-03/2:32 PM Reply

what's the matter bean boy? got too many beans on your bean?

[8] sir_heff › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-May-03/6:34 AM Reply

ummm ya......

[n/a] BleedingRose 13-Oct-04/10:12 PM Reply

I have decided upon re-reading my own work that the main portion of this item was designed merely as a prolongment of my true message.
As this goes against my belief in the truest qualities of communication, I have left only the portion that has ever had real meaning.

[7] scitz 14-Oct-04/8:08 AM Reply

end last line with
thats why i hate most
poems of love

better flow, good blast of words

[n/a] BleedingRose › scitz 14-Oct-04/2:34 PM Reply

um, it wouldnt rhyme(sp?)