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lost (short)

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 May 2003 · 11 comments

I lost my body in the sands of time lost my mind to the sound of this rhyme lost everybody, everybody I know lost everyone and now I’m alone

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[6] horus8 6-May-03/3:25 PM Reply
I lost my body, in the sands of time.
Lost my mind, to the sound of this rhyme.

lost everybody, everyone I know.
I lost everybody, that's why I'm alone.
[6] deleted user 6-May-03/6:45 PM Reply
its ok, nothing wrong with it but u could add more
[6] horus8 › deleted user 6-May-03/8:25 PM Reply
add more what? heff perhaps? yes, bring more heff to your poem sir! farGHHHHHHHHHH! arrrdghhhhhhh. just now there was a triple homocide 5 mile from everyone, everywhere, and know one knows it yet. cool.
[n/a] sir_heff › horus8 8-May-03/8:34 AM Reply
i thouhgt of this as a lyric to a techno song, so it would repeat many times.......
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › sir_heff 8-May-03/10:02 AM Reply
how many times?
[n/a] sir_heff › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-May-03/6:18 AM Reply
roughly 28
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › sir_heff 9-May-03/8:01 AM Reply
You've got the answer wrong. What you meant to say was "the least fixed point of the function f : Real -> Real where f(x) = |x| and Real is the set of real numbers". What have you got to say for yourself, now?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-May-03/9:11 PM Reply
Or perhaps you meant K where K = aleph_K, ie the limit of the series {aleph_0, aleph_aleph_0,...,}? I very much doubt there is such a big number. I doubt you are not a cad.
[n/a] sir_heff › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 10-May-03/9:39 PM Reply
where do you think i got 28?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › sir_heff 10-May-03/10:16 PM Reply
If the bones are correct, you plucked it from the hamper of a sleeping rogue, wearing nothing but the singleton set of nudity.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7-May-03/8:52 AM Reply
a bit short