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lost (short) (Lyric) by sir_heff I lost my body in the sands of time
lost my mind to the sound of this rhyme
lost everybody, everybody I know
lost everyone and now Iâm alone
Up the ladder:
When the Future Comes to Pass
Down the ladder:
Final Comment
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Posted: May 6, 2003 11:29 AM PDT; Last modified: May 6, 2003 11:29 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8847394 Overall Rank: 9932 Comments:
its ok, nothing wrong with it but u could add more
add more what? heff perhaps? yes, bring more heff to your poem sir! farGHHHHHHHHHH! arrrdghhhhhhh. just now there was a triple homocide 5 mile from everyone, everywhere, and know one knows it yet. cool.
i thouhgt of this as a lyric to a techno song, so it would repeat many times.......
how many times?
roughly 28
You've got the answer wrong. What you meant to say was "the least fixed point of the function f : Real -> Real where f(x) = |x| and Real is the set of real numbers". What have you got to say for yourself, now?
Or perhaps you meant K where K = aleph_K, ie the limit of the series {aleph_0, aleph_aleph_0,...,}? I very much doubt there is such a big number. I doubt you are not a cad.
where do you think i got 28?
If the bones are correct, you plucked it from the hamper of a sleeping rogue, wearing nothing but the singleton set of nudity.
a bit short
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Lost my mind, to the sound of this rhyme.
lost everybody, everyone I know.
I lost everybody, that's why I'm alone.