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lost (short) (Lyric) by sir_heff

I lost my body in the sands of time lost my mind to the sound of this rhyme lost everybody, everybody I know lost everyone and now I’m alone

horus8 6-May-03/8:25 PM
add more what? heff perhaps? yes, bring more heff to your poem sir! farGHHHHHHHHHH! arrrdghhhhhhh. just now there was a triple homocide 5 mile from everyone, everywhere, and know one knows it yet. cool.




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