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When the Future Comes to Pass (Lyric) by e1ementfire
Watch as it comes...don't stop when I run As fire swallows a land so hollow There's innocence in youth But what's the use when the old have sold their souls To the cold for control So watch as it unfolds for it has been fortold That evil will lay hold on the hearts of willing men And after filling them there will be a building then Of killing, hate and sin Destroyed and cleansed by fire For the chance to set sights higher And re-begin by Devine Desire to bind the Evil Lier Don't forget that an innocence diminished Will finish all forgiveness But it is this admitance that gives hope to be replinished But be aware of the snare that lies within the Siren's Hair In the wake of a Nuclear Blast A Desert Nation is turned to glass Pride goes before the fall... Did we even have to ask?

Up the ladder: vent tent
Down the ladder: lost (short)

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.571429
Weighted score: 4.8847394
Overall Rank: 9927
Posted: April 19, 2003 1:07 PM PDT; Last modified: April 19, 2003 1:07 PM PDT
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Comments:
[7] Ranger @ 213.1.45.14 | 20-Apr-03/1:17 AM | Reply
Sounds like Corrosion of Conformity. Now whatever happened to them...
[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.72 | 22-Apr-03/6:44 AM | Reply
replEnished. A religious Eminem? Liked it anyway.
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