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lost (short) (Lyric) by sir_heff

I lost my body in the sands of time lost my mind to the sound of this rhyme lost everybody, everybody I know lost everyone and now I’m alone

Jay J.C. 6-May-03/6:45 PM
its ok, nothing wrong with it but u could add more




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