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Openings (Free verse) by sir_heff
Shadows in a mystery hall, shedding a light that shows all. There is something more then meets the eye, somethings there that gets me high. Soft melodies whispering in my ears, the joyish things i wish to hear. The light in my heart grows more strong, beating like the perfect song. The hall becomes a wide open field, inside of which i have no fears. Time leaves me breathless in this perfection, so much that i start to lose my complection. I'll leave you there to die or hope, and no, i wont bring you a bag of dope.

Up the ladder: perfection show
Down the ladder: Holocaust

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4886
Posted: August 8, 2004 2:26 AM PDT; Last modified: August 8, 2004 2:26 AM PDT
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[n/a] sir_heff @ 65.172.117.1 | 10-Sep-04/8:40 AM | Reply
i wrote this with my g/f, she wrote the first line, i did the second and so on...
she thinks i f*cked the ending up...
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