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Openings (Free verse) by sir_heff
Shadows in a mystery hall,
shedding a light that shows all.
There is something more then meets the eye,
somethings there that gets me high.
Soft melodies whispering in my ears,
the joyish things i wish to hear.
The light in my heart grows more strong,
beating like the perfect song.
The hall becomes a wide open field,
inside of which i have no fears.
Time leaves me breathless in this perfection,
so much that i start to lose my complection.
I'll leave you there to die or hope,
and no, i wont bring you a bag of dope.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4954
Posted: August 8, 2004 2:26 AM PDT; Last modified: August 8, 2004 2:26 AM PDT
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she thinks i f*cked the ending up...