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Understand (Other) by Luv2write Too many times I have missed the chance
Overlooked the opportunities
Always searching for a way to tell you
Never finding the right moment
Denying the severity of the emotions
Relying on another conversation topic
Eliminating any possible talk about
What my heart can only dream.
Up the ladder:
Depression
Down the ladder:
She'll never know
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Posted: April 21, 2003 8:03 PM PDT; Last modified: April 28, 2003 7:40 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7663 Comments:
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sir_heff @ 65.172.117.1
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22-Apr-03/9:23 AM
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i think you should revise the last 3 lines
My heart understands only buttered crawdads and old mill'.
Again, the catch-alls...
chance opportunities a way moment emotion conversation topic? (that's awful) possible talk dream Can you be specific please. Pretend your writing a news article, just the facts.
expresses something that i think everyone has felt at some time or another. very true.
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