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Understand (Other) by Luv2write

Too many times I have missed the chance Overlooked the opportunities Always searching for a way to tell you Never finding the right moment Denying the severity of the emotions Relying on another conversation topic Eliminating any possible talk about What my heart can only dream.

sir_heff 22-Apr-03/9:23 AM
i think you should revise the last 3 lines




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