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Depression (Lyric) by stacylynn_3
Darkness as far as the eye can see, drowning into a pool of silence. Motionless from the frustrations that bind me. Why am I here? Sorrow repletes my mind, Anger... torwards everything I fear. I am looking for something, something I can not find. What could it be? Reflectionless beyond appearence, heartless to people so dear to me. What happened to me? Restless no matter how exhausted, fatigued, with no motions to blame Someone please, turn back on the light, I want to again be the same.

Up the ladder: Scars
Down the ladder: Understand

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7662
Posted: March 25, 2003 5:58 PM PST; Last modified: March 25, 2003 5:58 PM PST
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[8] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 26-Mar-03/9:07 AM | Reply
Liked what you done with this, it sounds raw and from the heart, that i am sure of. The light my friend is your eyes, open them and you will be found.

Think about it.

heres a fat number to hug 8
[10] dancin_n_da_moonlite @ 64.12.116.135 | 21-Jan-05/12:57 PM | Reply
very nice...............
-mega
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