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What do you see (Free verse) by Luv2write
I don't understand what you could possibly see in me I'm not some leggy supermodel I'm no aspiring actress Superb singer or dazzling dancer I'm just tall and stringy With minute parts in the spring musical Belting songs in the shower and wasting energy to TobyMac And OK, so I imagined that you would love me But I never really expected it to happen Through all my dreams of you Not one of them seemed to be realistic at any time in my life But I am crazy about you Your gifts and your talents Your amazing laugh and your inspiring smile How you make me forget how unworthy of you I am I am always looking forward to the day We will be together And none of my imperfections will matter And all that will be Is you and me.

Up the ladder: You
Down the ladder: no more

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7267
Posted: April 21, 2003 8:01 PM PDT; Last modified: April 21, 2003 8:01 PM PDT
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[8] sir_heff @ 65.172.117.1 | 22-Apr-03/9:21 AM | Reply
i feel like that all the time.
and your probly "worthy" of more than you think
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