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You (Free verse) by adrenalize Every heartbeat has your name
Every breath kindles your flame
This hunger that grows for you
This river of desire that flows to you
You are my shelter
In the scorching heat
You are the rain
That caresses my face
You are the colour
That brightens up life
You are the magic
Of all the seasons
You are the dream
That pulls me to it everyday
You are the promise
That I vow to fulfil
Up the ladder:
sorry, but i am lame
Down the ladder:
What do you see
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Posted: April 12, 2003 11:54 AM PDT; Last modified: April 12, 2003 11:54 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.029801 Overall Rank: 7266 Comments:
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Todd @ 65.56.222.74
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12-Apr-03/5:46 PM
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That is an excellent poem.A vey good read.Your name seems familiar.Are you a member of poet sanctuary or voicesnet? Take care
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adrenalize @ 202.141.239.130
> Todd
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13-Apr-03/5:12 AM
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Thank you. I really appreciate it. No I'm not a member of any of the places u stated. Take care
well said -7-
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