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Free verse № 47049

You

by adrenalize

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Apr 2003 · 3 comments

Every heartbeat has your name Every breath kindles your flame This hunger that grows for you This river of desire that flows to you You are my shelter In the scorching heat You are the rain That caresses my face You are the colour That brightens up life You are the magic Of all the seasons You are the dream That pulls me to it everyday You are the promise That I vow to fulfil

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[8] Todd 12-Apr-03/5:46 PM Reply
That is an excellent poem.A vey good read.Your name seems familiar.Are you a member of poet sanctuary or voicesnet? Take care
[n/a] adrenalize › Todd 13-Apr-03/5:12 AM Reply
Thank you. I really appreciate it. No I'm not a member of any of the places u stated. Take care
[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom 14-Apr-03/12:47 PM Reply
well said -7-