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You (Free verse) by adrenalize

Every heartbeat has your name Every breath kindles your flame This hunger that grows for you This river of desire that flows to you You are my shelter In the scorching heat You are the rain That caresses my face You are the colour That brightens up life You are the magic Of all the seasons You are the dream That pulls me to it everyday You are the promise That I vow to fulfil

Todd 12-Apr-03/5:46 PM
That is an excellent poem.A vey good read.Your name seems familiar.Are you a member of poet sanctuary or voicesnet? Take care




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