Re: a comment on Your word's hurt, only you. by horus8	21-Feb-03/12:39 AM
Yes baba but pray tell our qoutes are accurate her's are apparantly from memory? tsk... wacko jacko, moo goo gai pan? i hate you. i love you. commercials? lunches with music people when she doesn't play music nor listen to music, what of acting? what of it. exactly. the mirror wont let her leave the house let alone act, even human. what in the fuck is this insane freak getting at? did i tell them that i indeed took her virginity? no, what would be the good in that? Perhaps... a balance? no, only if it was worth while... was it? no... like most inexperienced sociopaths getting seduced... it was draining. thank god i ate my own semen... before she bottled it for crotch deodorant. thank god i'm a drug addict fag. face it mrs. bravo. you. can't. win. it's just not in the cards this time sweet heart. your motives were false. just like your aspirations.
Re: a comment on Eros, and Psycho by horus8	21-Feb-03/12:29 AM
Well, i will say that suprises me coming from you, but yes it's a promising vilanelle, and honestly (and i know that you know) i have always been blunt out of a love for what i do. As are you, so regardless of our squabbles i think now would be a good time to say... i love you.
Re: a comment on Your word's hurt, only you. by horus8	20-Feb-03/7:16 PM
Why oh lord must i get the big pay back... is not my homosexuality and blatant drug addictions and life of nomadic instability without parents not enough?...oh lord, must i be swallowed by herman Melvilles fat assed wicked step daughter's fish too...will they come and remove my microwave and juicer sweet lordy... do they know that last week i came close to getting three commercials just like the week before that and the week before that? why was i a bad boy sweet jesus.? why did i feed the stray mutt? i would repent, but i'm in to much pain too... notice how hard it is for me to even write my thoughts...lord when you made me the evil one why did you not tell me that i would be getting the big rock hard drug coated pay backs, oh lovely god... was it the beauty of my tight buns...the whiteness of my dense perfect smirk...i want you to know lordy..nothing has changed here? in fact i'm getting ten extra channels on tv and my mail is delivered dry and not wet, my hamock is even swinging slower but i know that the pain is there somewhere...with my missing furniture..the pain is in my lonely...loveseat. it has been laid on while i was...sleeping, now my chairs stained and just a mess, and i feel a tear a brewing. my peccavi's were selfish, just like yours sweet jesu. i fear my loveseat is now ruined.
Re: a comment on Your word's hurt, only you. by horus8	20-Feb-03/7:02 PM
Oh...lord, forgive me...why of lord must i get the big pay back? is not my homosexuality and drug addiction without parent's or hope enough. must i be swallowed by herman melville's fat ass wicked step daughter too. why oh lord. must i be punished will they come take away my microwave and juicer?... will my mail be soaking wet does they know that last week there were three comercials i didn't get just like the week before that..why oh lord is this week so much more painful sweet jesus.. i'm gettinsg the big payback now i can feels it. i can feel it in my last piece of furniture. my love seat.
Re: Call Me by newdawnfades	20-Feb-03/5:27 PM
lactating while you weep is very becoming. i gave you the blue one.
Re: vent tent by Crakyamuni	20-Feb-03/11:57 AM
I have never heard a buddhist come out of left field like you just did to express his feelings in such a un-monkishishish way. You are my hero. you wouldn't know budha from Malthusian. maybe that's your gimmeck? give em hell kid! here i packed you a lunch and even wrote your name on it, so i wouldn't forget who you are and you would never remember and nobody brought a fgucking snack anyway, Chip.
Re: Moo Gai Pai lover (dedicated to Settle) by Sylvia Bravo	20-Feb-03/11:50 AM
What i thought was impressive was how you rhymed pengs,pong, I, and begs while maintaining absolutely no cohesiveness. You should get a life and give up on writing, before the stupid in you catches up with the psychotic desperation. THE SOONER YOU ADMIT TO THE FACT THAT you are an uneducated lesbian in need of thorazine, the sooner your dreams of being a papaya farmer with a mustache and cock will come true. Until then though, this is not a vilanelle, or sadly even remotely funny. Settle is gay and into rock hard hot biceps and shafts a pumping. not desperate idiots on the verge of garbage disposing their own faces out of sheer pathetic loneliness, and the fact that no one gives a shit.
Re: a comment on Weekend at the Taj by <~>	19-Feb-03/12:17 PM
The great one... When did you get back, online? i thought you were counting sheep in a shack in tasmania?
Re: a comment on Weekend at the Taj by <~>	19-Feb-03/12:15 PM
That's what i said;) <{.-:-.}> here's the ufo i promised you. xo h.
Re: Weekend at the Taj by <~>	19-Feb-03/11:34 AM
It's missing your boss and a pawn shop.
Re: Iterated Fuck by nentwined	19-Feb-03/11:30 AM
Best thing you've written in 6 months, and people wonder why i tear the shit out of pseudo poetry? obviously because it's the opposite of this... GQT AWARDE! 10
Re: April Showers by mindsigns	18-Feb-03/7:33 PM
nice try, but you fail. miserably may i add. watch Look at me a fucking hack a steaming mound of poo i can't see or turn back because i'm sniffing glue and i know i'm absurd for dicking with the pope it's just the way i praise the word when i can barely cope with the shit i read all day how can one survive i need a whip to properly flay i hate being alive Can you fucking blame me? You were serving cold tea.
Re: On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels	18-Feb-03/7:26 PM
children mimic their parents, perhaps your a pig? great haiku though.
Re: Synchronicity (Senryu) by bunniesnangels	18-Feb-03/7:22 PM
Sink masturbating.
Re: Options (Senryu) by bunniesnangels	18-Feb-03/7:21 PM
Walk versus gay sex a bowl of pears on table factory worker
Re: Say the Word 'Trousers' Without Laughing by Nicholas Jones	18-Feb-03/7:18 PM
Teah, but does your son nod off at three years old on the couch while playing video games sick on robitussin... sitting up playing salt water fishing? some thing just make me giggle.
Re: Dance With Me by marvelis	18-Feb-03/7:05 PM
Will do.
Re: Past by Dostoyevsky	18-Feb-03/6:52 PM
Check line 12, and do you mean fractal or fractual. lol. i'll wait.
Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin	18-Feb-03/6:49 PM
it's Quailing named after that thingy that hangs in their face... lol. the last was the best.
Re: Karma by blankel	18-Feb-03/6:41 PM
You have exceptional timing, but your poetry? creditcard's 3.00$? to view your web page and poetry? what are you some kind of fucking uppity elitist jew? you should fucking pay people three dollars to read this shit. three dollars a fucking second, idiot.