Re: Everyday Phoenix by AtalantaPendragonne |
27-Feb-03/2:25 PM |
"No more the gaudy light of flare" you are the first man to see the gaudy light. Hail! cheeser! I guess you are settle complete with the typos and spelling errs. huh! you aint so good bruddah, sorry. i did enjoy the constant references to things left in a fires origin and wake, but that's it. you must paint? Risdi doesn't have creative writing courses? either does North Carolina. Whatta ya know. Birds of a feather flock together. I have more then one stone, chuckles. i am very patient.
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Re: Forget I Asked by AtalantaPendragonne |
27-Feb-03/2:17 PM |
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Re: Too Nearly Remembered by AtalantaPendragonne |
27-Feb-03/2:16 PM |
"waver" = waiver, must be tr and not settle tsk. what war? this piece is barely a seven, and i'm in a good mood. What a waste of time...see... settle would not make an error like that, that's where you blew your cover. Both of your edges are boring and dull period anyway just giving you a heads up sycophants.
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Re: Too Nearly Remembered by AtalantaPendragonne |
27-Feb-03/2:12 PM |
That was pleasent, for an 'other'. It must be terribly awkward to try so hard only to be ignored consistantly. nice vilanelle. The rhyme scheme was almost as complex as the story, or a haircut.
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Re: Moon In My Blood by AtalantaPendragonne |
27-Feb-03/2:06 PM |
Well, you have your user name going for you, atleast. Do you know who atalanta was? i hope so. Otherwise you would just suck, bleeding or not.
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Re: I'll love you Heather, for ever and ever by TanHand |
26-Feb-03/8:18 PM |
Hurry! I wouldn't want to miss that. Will you wear your shower cap too?
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Re: Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig |
25-Feb-03/9:01 PM |
19. syl. i would like to take this opportunity to say seamen eight and a half times
seamen seamen
seamen seamen seamen
seamen seamen seamen
sea
great subject by the way.
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Re: a comment on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig |
25-Feb-03/8:54 PM |
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Re: No One by sk8boardandpoems |
25-Feb-03/8:49 PM |
When i was a young man growing up in southern ca. i skated with gator, and lance mountain a lot, but they did not write poetry this profound, but if they did think about all of the great tricks that would of never been invented. Perhaps you juggle? This poem has a long way to go, but you have to start somewhere i guess. What's your problem with razora? You are aware that in the writing spectrum she out classes you horribly, right? I don't think this deserves a zero, so here's a five.
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Re: a comment on Eros, and Psycho by horus8 |
25-Feb-03/8:24 PM |
Sure, i love his stuff. let me go take a look.
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Re: a comment on Unmasking Wyverns by horus8 |
23-Feb-03/10:55 AM |
Here is the edited version
for the New Yorker and they
Gay boys, Garret lief Sexton.
(the strong change is unmasking
and crow)
Unmasking Wyverns
Watch me slave at words I could never say
Monsoon shark god furious
The love of my father, she snaked away
Wind swept waves bled 'til Sunday
It's a shame I am that curious
Watch me slave at words I could never say
Fierce night howls paved the way
And the way it was deleterious
The love of my father, she snaked away
Children raced past our well-lit display
An unintentional metamorphosis
Watch me slave at words I could never say
A crow-haired woman asked, "was I okay?"
Lips crimson and voluptuous
The love of my father, she snaked away
A god of wind, a shark at play
Your past is not mysterious
Watch me slave at words I could never say
The love of my father, she snaked away.
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Re: a comment on Your word's hurt, only you. by horus8 |
21-Feb-03/8:09 PM |
please, the master of the mispel sighting my mispels, must we?
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Re: a comment on Your word's hurt, only you. by horus8 |
21-Feb-03/8:07 PM |
You emailed me about me emailing James about painting? then you asked me about tr and i said "totally uninteresting and boring?", "why would i want to talk to you about tr when i could give a shit about tr". a moment later she called me and said you had e-mailed her and was saying why would you say that to nick and i was like because it's true? (at this point in time i had been avoiding her for a month,you know not returning calls or answering the phone or emails. your normal i'm not interested in you any more procedures)
then i hung up on her, and that's when sylvia bravo went chookie chookie in the fruit salad. i mean you are totally neither here nor there anout it all and that's cool with me, but, just look at your user name for christ sake... how fucking reveiling is that? how symbolic is that? you put my last name on her first FOR THE LOVE OF GOD THEN all of a sudden poof, here she comes out of the wood work again... jesus, don't you see what doing shit like that does to this nutjobs already instabial head gear. good grief linus, i appreciate your appology, and below this is the email, so thanks again.s
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Re: a comment on Your word's hurt, only you. by horus8 |
21-Feb-03/7:50 PM |
No sweat dewd. sorry for getting edgy, but just take a look at this bird fly... have you ever seen a nut crack harder? it's cool i had to change my number any way...bill collectors. lol. but i told you. Any way, no sense in trippin' on it...ah, so are you gonna sell me a painting or what? Let's trade art perhaps collection to collection. e-mail me, was James serious about painting? I thought you were kidding, i would of thought it would of came naturally to him like everything else ( painting i mean i know he place the church pipes) I don't mean to take a hard stand about the muti thing, but fuck can you blame me?h
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Re: Pinjur by Shardik |
21-Feb-03/6:55 PM |
schizophrenics see secret messages everywhere. it's a james talor song, and it was before you were born, and i think it was a folk song before even he played it, just because you went to school there, don't fucking ruin the place for everyone else.lol. There are no messages. i am not mr. pig, but you are clinicaly and most obviously a seriously unstable cuek. Jesus. i have never seen a person light themselves on fire before, impressive, I mean, if you could write, of course.
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Re: a comment on Your word's hurt, only you. by horus8 |
21-Feb-03/6:41 PM |
On a serious level though Settle, I thought we were starting to bond. Why would you kickstart muti like that again. I thought we had a truce? I know it's funny and all, but the band great white isn't funny they are dousing their mullets in the blood of rhode islanders. once bitten twice shy. my my my.
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Re: a comment on Your word's hurt, only you. by horus8 |
21-Feb-03/6:28 PM |
Damn. I tried to sound evil and dangerous. I guess capt. undergarments was right my dark friend the rainbow speedos are better. How much more pressure do you think needs to be applied to the queen of dry hair and stink muff to force a drowning? two lima bean lap snorkels, or a handful of zeppelin bootlegs? sorry for snapping earlier... it's the straydog down the street, it keeps howling at my ass pressed against my window. i am begining to think tanya might be the first straight woman born actually a gay man... the way she yearns for it, those sweet things she says. It must of been funny to pick up the phone and get this numbers been disconnected instead of oops, yes sir... no body's home. So do i have 9k to get a ticket or not i'm confused? Why again would i have a friend named dark angel who is an investment banker in new york? oh yes for the same reason i would send my wife packing to Texas?
Could you be a bit more imaginative, how about fiji, or an investment banker from sweden? Who cares? apperantly she does... lest why she keep coming back to a party where she's being mocked even by her own words... this gets more disturbing by the moment. I'm excited to see what happens next. I don't think i have enough space to store all of these comments about how, apparently, she is not a phsychotic stalker in the making? Why even keep coming back? it must be sheer FUCKING momentum at this point in time. lol.
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Re: a comment on Your word's hurt, only you. by horus8 |
21-Feb-03/5:26 PM |
You know there's a backlash that occurs with being intelligent Settle, a weakness, a quirk, something just a bit off kilter that occurs in other aspects of the human condition, a balance if you will, like prometheus and the gift of fire. For instance a person without the use of their legs using their minds more, a blind musician etc. Figure yours out? have you thought about it? my guess is you are socially retarded completely unable to make or keep friends. The Satanic bible would call you a psychic vampire, but what the fuck do those idiots know lol. what i know is, that you are horribly lonely and unable to communicate your feelings to those you want to the most... turning you into the... common asshole, barely mundane. Being a good artist can't fix that perhaps you can make a picture of that you inside of your own asshole being an asshole, and fucking with people in a way that extends out of the two dimensional (not that that's impressive just look at porn sites) regardless of how you look at it. All it amounts to is the same. You are gay... No one cares. we aren't blaming you, we are not your mom or dad. It's okay to be into shit and cocks and tits. Life is not about black and white. it's about rainbows. stupid.
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Re: a comment on Your word's hurt, only you. by horus8 |
21-Feb-03/2:58 PM |
Let me explain something to you fuckling. settle thinks it's funny to forward a psycopath private e-mails between him and myself in order to instigate arguments between me and this fucking degenerate, people who do that kind of shit are stooping to levels even below tanya (tanya fucking whatever her last name is) this person lives near to me and calls my home constantly, both of my lines. My son is sick with the flu, and i have work to do. Yet somehow none of this matters to you three. tell you what i've already spent money changing my home phone, next week i have to then change my cell. so yeah, i'm a little fucking irate, and you can tell settle if this fucking chick does anything to my family because she's stupid and unpredictable. I will fly out to risdi and do something predictable. I'll break his fucking head off. Hows that for flying off and handles dickface? So with that said. Cheers.
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Re: a comment on Your word's hurt, only you. by horus8 |
21-Feb-03/9:42 AM |
How about you go fuck your mother, then ride your pet lemming off a precipice, Cunt? Oh, don't forget to smear shit all over you and lube your wheels for battle against your own face and asshole, asshole. How about i go over to your work and go....oh, by jove, do shut up muffy you aRE MAKING THE TURD IN MY TEA CUP SINK SO, NO FUCK FACE Y-O-U S-H-U-T THE FUCK UP, i don't recal asking for your input James, go shine your fucking hot rod.
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