poemranker ::I'll love you Heather, for ever and ever by TanHand

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Free verse № 41344

I'll love you Heather, for ever and ever

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Feb 2003 · Edited 26 Feb 2003 · 5 comments

Today at school I tripped I did I hit my noggin on a boy named Sid He said that soon he'd make me pay After school he did in a terrible way THIS IS WHY I BEAT YOUR DUMB ANOREXIC BITCH FACE DOWN ALL AROUND THE KITCHEN LIKE A WILY FLY In the afternoon I played in the park With Wally and Joe and on a lark They pushed me into old man Emerson's yard Why couldn't we push Joey? (He's a retard) THIS IS WHY I BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF THAT FAGGOT BROTHER OF YOURS WITH A ROLL OF QUARTERS IN MY FIST Late at night as you tucked me in You told me I should pray for my sins I confessed them all and when I got to the third I got the impression that nobody heard THIS IS WHY I KILLED YOUR FATHER BY STEALING HIS MEDICINE TO COLLECT THE LIFE INSURANCE. YOUR MOM IS NEXT.

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[8] god'swife 24-Feb-03/8:28 PM Reply
Lovely, freshly laundered sheets lovely
New socks lovely
The smell of burning dust from turning on the furnace for the first time this year lovely. Couplet after S2 needs rewriting. Doesn't jive with feel of poem.

[8] Nanshe 26-Feb-03/7:24 PM Reply
Scourge.
[n/a] Jeremi › Nanshe 27-Feb-03/6:06 AM Reply
I'll love you Nanshe. for ever and ever WHAM WHAM WHAM WHAM WHAM TRY MENSTRUATING NOW SHEDEMON
[10] horus8 26-Feb-03/8:18 PM Reply
Hurry! I wouldn't want to miss that. Will you wear your shower cap too?
[10] horus8 21-Jun-03/9:31 AM Reply
A superior work by all accounts.