poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on I'll love you Heather, for ever and ever by TanHand.

god'swife24 Feb 2003

Lovely, freshly laundered sheets lovely
New socks lovely
The smell of burning dust from turning on the furnace for the first time this year lovely. Couplet after S2 needs rewriting. Doesn't jive with feel of poem.