Re: haiku by silentcat	17-Sep-02/7:18 AM
cute.
Re: Tom and Jerry by WarrenGDawg	17-Sep-02/7:19 AM
the cliche title may weaken this...
Re: Tennesee Waterfall by razorgrin	17-Sep-02/7:20 AM
9 points for making me smile--plus one for adding to my vocabulary.."tennessee waterfall" is a perfect description...
Re: Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi	17-Sep-02/7:21 AM
your cliche title weakens your poem
Re: Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog	17-Sep-02/7:22 AM
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Re: Hot Maid by Agemo-Z	17-Sep-02/7:24 AM
you've got one of those old computers? I remember those wang computers. does it still work?
Re: Despair by dave78981	17-Sep-02/7:25 AM
vivid. bravo.
Re: Devil, BEWARE!!! by gay	17-Sep-02/7:26 AM
I failed math.
Re: S by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	17-Sep-02/7:29 AM
perplexingly violent.
Re: Spring Haiku by Staika	17-Sep-02/7:30 AM
effective simile. good show.
Re: Date Rape Gang Bang by Bachus	17-Sep-02/7:32 AM
when you were a kid, did you play pinata with hornet's nests? it seems that your goal is only to illicit a negative response. if that was your intention--you have found success.
Re: A-Team, vol I by Agemo-Z	17-Sep-02/7:34 AM
I pity the fool that gives this a bad rating!
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Sep-02/7:42 AM
so did he explode? if it ended all others...
Re: Moon and Azalea by Aidaho	17-Sep-02/7:43 AM
excellent. most excellent.
Re: Pork by AEcutee1435	17-Sep-02/7:46 AM
perhaps too simple....
Re: Chew your food! by <{Baba^Yaga}>	17-Sep-02/7:49 AM
it almost meant something---
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Sep-02/7:50 AM
sounds like a kid i knew once. big mouth, bad teeth.
Re: The Haiku by beakism	17-Sep-02/7:51 AM
wow. incredible insight. and all this time I thout it was an art form, dealing with the purification and distillation of imagery and emotion.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Sep-02/7:55 AM
that's the story of my life. very succinct. bravo.
Re: Worldly Wise by anitawit	22-Nov-02/7:12 AM
the ONLY word I don't thnik fits is "scruples". It seems out of character. Otherwise, I liked it a lot--a 10.