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Wife beater t-shirt (Haiku) by bondjedi
I am your dad, son lie on the couch, watch football I don't give a damn
Up the ladder: Disenchanted
Down the ladder: Plastic People
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.875
Weighted score: 5.5042653
Overall Rank: 2658
Posted: August 4, 2002 7:55 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2002 7:55 PM PDT
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[7] wordherd @ 24.93.210.35 | 4-Aug-02/8:34 PM | Reply
i like it
[8] Agemo-Z @ 142.166.108.249 | 4-Aug-02/10:17 PM | Reply
Beautiful!
[10] Tarquin De La Bog @ 62.7.134.133 | 14-Aug-02/4:32 PM | Reply
Wow! I laughed till I cried. 10. It's funny but profound. The title is absolute genius, and the Haiku does not fail to live up to it.
[9] Venus @ 198.81.17.32 | 14-Aug-02/4:43 PM | Reply
Such a moving piece. 9/10
[8] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.64.69 | 17-Sep-02/7:21 AM | Reply
your cliche title weakens your poem
[5] halofriendly @ 4.159.131.212 | 21-Apr-04/5:58 PM | Reply
Very sad...good, simplistic imagery.
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