poemranker ::Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi

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Haiku № 7515

Wife beater t-shirt

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Aug 2002 · 6 comments

I am your dad, son lie on the couch, watch football I don't give a damn

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6 comments

[7] wordherd 4-Aug-02/8:34 PM Reply
i like it
[8] Agemo-Z 4-Aug-02/10:17 PM Reply
Beautiful!
[10] Tarquin De La Bog 14-Aug-02/4:32 PM Reply
Wow! I laughed till I cried. 10. It's funny but profound. The title is absolute genius, and the Haiku does not fail to live up to it.
[9] Venus 14-Aug-02/4:43 PM Reply
Such a moving piece. 9/10
[8] Robert K Foster 17-Sep-02/7:21 AM Reply
your cliche title weakens your poem
[5] halofriendly 21-Apr-04/5:58 PM Reply
Very sad...good, simplistic imagery.