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haiku (Haiku) by silentcat
my simple haiku perfect in its seventeen syllables. the end.


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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5518
Posted: July 31, 2002 6:31 AM PDT; Last modified: July 31, 2002 6:31 AM PDT
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[n/a] kawakurdi @ 195.93.32.166 | 31-Jul-02/7:05 AM | Reply
I like my sweet seventeen/
I kiss her and hug her/
But she may still be
an underage haiku!
[10] Sigh'ense... @ 209.245.64.172 | 31-Jul-02/10:16 AM | Reply
How amusingly tantilizing... Da1 w/ resentful satisfaction
[7] Shin-Bojangles @ 198.164.188.163 | 18-Aug-02/2:32 AM | Reply
Are Haikus supposes to have capitalization? If so, then yu gots some 'splaining to do, Lucy!!!
[8] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.64.69 | 17-Sep-02/7:18 AM | Reply
cute.
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