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Pork (Haiku) by AEcutee1435 Big
Round
Very Brown
Pork
Up the ladder:
Enslaved
Down the ladder:
rain
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 1.0
Posted: July 15, 2002 9:46 AM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2002 9:46 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.9242344 Overall Rank: 13420 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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15-Jul-02/9:51 AM
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Small, square, naked monk, run.
You know what mister mean boy? THAT WAS THE WHOLE HAIKU maybe ur just a crappy haiku writer so why dont u go eat some cookies and get over urself?! U MEAN JERK! I CANT STAND U! GOSH THAT POEM ROCKED!
oh well done. expressive, well within the traditional 5-7-5 syllable structure of haiku, and evocative of the true nature of blah blah blah. is this a joke?
perhaps too simple....
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