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rain (Free verse) by skinda
today my life isn't well tomorrow it'll probably be hell i can feel the pain but why stop the rain the rain will stop my fears it'll dry all my tears it will wash away my horrible bad day my day wasn't great it was everything i hate it was like my life always full of strife today my life isn't well tomorrow it'll probably be hell i can feel the pain but why stop the rain
Up the ladder: Pork
Down the ladder: winter
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Weighted score: 3.9242344
Overall Rank: 13426
Posted: November 26, 2002 10:20 AM PST; Last modified: November 26, 2002 10:20 AM PST
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Comments:
[n/a] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.64.1 | 26-Nov-02/12:18 PM | Reply
rather trite. rather redundant. try for fresher images.
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.247 | 26-Nov-02/7:18 PM | Reply
Shout out to the peeps in Fresno!!!!
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.247 | 26-Nov-02/7:18 PM | Reply
Shout out to the peeps in Fresno!!!!
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