poemranker ::rain by skinda

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Free verse № 27096

rain

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Nov 2002 · 3 comments

today my life isn't well tomorrow it'll probably be hell i can feel the pain but why stop the rain the rain will stop my fears it'll dry all my tears it will wash away my horrible bad day my day wasn't great it was everything i hate it was like my life always full of strife today my life isn't well tomorrow it'll probably be hell i can feel the pain but why stop the rain

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3 comments

[n/a] Robert K Foster 26-Nov-02/12:18 PM Reply
rather trite. rather redundant. try for fresher images.
[0] poetandknowit 26-Nov-02/7:18 PM Reply
Shout out to the peeps in Fresno!!!!
[0] poetandknowit 26-Nov-02/7:18 PM Reply
Shout out to the peeps in Fresno!!!!