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rain (Free verse) by skinda

today my life isn't well tomorrow it'll probably be hell i can feel the pain but why stop the rain the rain will stop my fears it'll dry all my tears it will wash away my horrible bad day my day wasn't great it was everything i hate it was like my life always full of strife today my life isn't well tomorrow it'll probably be hell i can feel the pain but why stop the rain

Robert K Foster 26-Nov-02/12:18 PM
rather trite. rather redundant. try for fresher images.




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