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Moon and Azalea (Haiku) by Aidaho
Moon and azalea. Scent of flower frames the night. I remember you.
Up the ladder: Memorial Park
Down the ladder: Sparks, until Sunvalley.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.9259257
Weighted score: 5.9236364
Overall Rank: 1409
Posted: April 14, 2002 11:05 PM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2002 11:05 PM PDT
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[8] nentwined @ | 14-Apr-02/11:50 PM | Reply
very pretty. =)
[8]... anonymous @ | 11-May-02/1:59 PM | Reply
My favorite song by hard rock gods Skid Row.
[8]... anonymous @ 62.254.32.4 | 19-May-02/12:45 AM | Reply
pretty but without internal dynamic; just two images together, inner and outer; no link. like "frames the night".

does the memory "frame" the internal night, mind that would be terrible if miswritten, only possible dynamic I can see.
[10] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.64.69 | 17-Sep-02/7:43 AM | Reply
excellent. most excellent.
[9] Ranger @ 212.219.142.161 | 6-Jan-03/6:03 AM | Reply
Damn good!
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