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Haiku № 988

Moon and Azalea

by Aidaho

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Apr 2002 · 5 comments

Moon and azalea. Scent of flower frames the night. I remember you.

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[8] nentwined 14-Apr-02/11:50 PM Reply
very pretty. =)
[8] anonymous 11-May-02/1:59 PM Reply
My favorite song by hard rock gods Skid Row.
[8] anonymous 19-May-02/12:45 AM Reply
pretty but without internal dynamic; just two images together, inner and outer; no link. like "frames the night".

does the memory "frame" the internal night, mind that would be terrible if miswritten, only possible dynamic I can see.
[10] Robert K Foster 17-Sep-02/7:43 AM Reply
excellent. most excellent.
[9] Ranger 6-Jan-03/6:03 AM Reply
Damn good!