poemranker ::Memorial Park by Mona Lisa

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Haiku № 60213

Memorial Park

by Mona Lisa

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Aug 2003 · Edited 11 Aug 2003 · 8 comments

His faded name, Carved in to history, For us to forget.

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8 comments

[9] http://mulberryfairy 11-Aug-03/8:05 AM Reply
Nice.
[8] horus8 11-Aug-03/6:36 PM Reply
"in to" into. Good title and nice 465.
[10] EAger to Offend 11-Aug-03/10:45 PM Reply
This is exactly that combination of vivid and vague that I speak of in "A Brand New Eye".
First haiku I've liked in a while!
[10] Kitch 14-Aug-03/2:51 AM Reply
Very nice
[n/a] deleted user 18-Aug-03/12:51 PM Reply
Why would Mona Lisa carve anything? She was just a ginky painting.
[0] Settle 20-Aug-03/6:24 AM Reply
I am pro-found.
[7] J.B. Manning 20-Aug-03/11:47 AM Reply
nice
[7] Bachus 16-Nov-03/1:36 AM Reply
Bring your in and your to together. Other than that, increase your verb power and symbolism. For instance? Who is he. Where is the park? who's us?