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Memorial Park (Haiku) by Mona Lisa

His faded name, Carved in to history, For us to forget.

EAger to Offend 11-Aug-03/10:45 PM
This is exactly that combination of vivid and vague that I speak of in "A Brand New Eye".
First haiku I've liked in a while!




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