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Memorial Park (Haiku) by Mona Lisa

His faded name, Carved in to history, For us to forget.

Bachus 16-Nov-03/1:36 AM
Bring your in and your to together. Other than that, increase your verb power and symbolism. For instance? Who is he. Where is the park? who's us?




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