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Haiku № 10164

Despair

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Aug 2002 · 2 comments

bright blue summer sky fire rains down from dark plumed clouds bodies fall, writhing

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2 comments

[9] Robert K Foster 17-Sep-02/7:25 AM Reply
vivid. bravo.
[8] Caducus 16-Dec-02/9:08 AM Reply
WTC, you say more in 3 lines than i read in 20, good to see a piece of work drowned in dark truth, 1st line sets the scene 3rd/4th rips it to pieces, haikus are not easy too