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Despair (Haiku) by dave78981 bright blue summer sky
fire rains down from dark plumed clouds
bodies fall, writhing
Up the ladder:
BEGINNINGS
Down the ladder:
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Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
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Posted: August 20, 2002 12:06 PM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2002 12:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9231596 Overall Rank: 9384 Comments:
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Robert K Foster @ 209.68.64.69
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17-Sep-02/7:25 AM
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vivid. bravo.
WTC, you say more in 3 lines than i read in 20, good to see a piece of work drowned in dark truth, 1st line sets the scene 3rd/4th rips it to pieces, haikus are not easy too
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