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Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Sep 2002 · 3 comments

so close yet worlds apart, funny how this one did start, need from one and from one need, you always question my every deed. feelings strong and truths will dare, of how we play and what is fair, but know that in the meaning of all i do, these deeds say simply "i love you"

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[7] INTRANSIT 23-Sep-02/2:54 PM Reply

I hate it when they don't listen! 7 his could use more and not hurt it.

[7] <~> 23-Sep-02/3:05 PM Reply

trippity-quick words, like the beginning of it all. when the need is sated, what will there be left but the deed? proceed with caution, but proceed.

[5] Mutant_X 29-Sep-02/5:38 AM Reply

it's a bit mysterious but it's a good poem,i liked that stanza "feelings strong and truths will dare".