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untitled (Free verse) by ThreeFourSix so close yet worlds apart,
funny how this one did start,
need from one and from one need,
you always question my every deed.
feelings strong and truths will dare,
of how we play and what is fair,
but know that in the meaning of all i do,
these deeds say simply "i love you"
Up the ladder:
Despair
Down the ladder:
The Freezer
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Posted: September 21, 2002 7:11 PM PDT; Last modified: September 21, 2002 7:11 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9231596 Overall Rank: 9385 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.107
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23-Sep-02/2:54 PM
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I hate it when they don't listen! 7 his could use more and not hurt it.
trippity-quick words, like the beginning of it all. when the need is sated, what will there be left but the deed? proceed with caution, but proceed.
it's a bit mysterious but it's a good poem,i liked that stanza "feelings strong and truths will dare".
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