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untitled (Free verse) by ThreeFourSix

so close yet worlds apart, funny how this one did start, need from one and from one need, you always question my every deed. feelings strong and truths will dare, of how we play and what is fair, but know that in the meaning of all i do, these deeds say simply "i love you"

<~> 23-Sep-02/3:05 PM
trippity-quick words, like the beginning of it all. when the need is sated, what will there be left but the deed? proceed with caution, but proceed.




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