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Despair (Haiku) by dave78981

bright blue summer sky fire rains down from dark plumed clouds bodies fall, writhing

Caducus 16-Dec-02/9:08 AM
WTC, you say more in 3 lines than i read in 20, good to see a piece of work drowned in dark truth, 1st line sets the scene 3rd/4th rips it to pieces, haikus are not easy too




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