| Re: God and Country by dougsoderstrom |
17-Sep-02/5:56 AM |
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interesting variation of line length.
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| Re: Faucet's got a nasty drip. FUCK! Not again! by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
17-Sep-02/5:57 AM |
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vile. an assassination of an art form.
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| Re: Dick Cheney, Man of Tomorrow by bondjedi |
17-Sep-02/5:58 AM |
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it has a real "boot scootin' boogie" feel to it.
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| Re: Cosmic Imbalance by Modulo |
17-Sep-02/5:59 AM |
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| Re: What is Black by ivoryangie1 |
17-Sep-02/6:01 AM |
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nice freeform--perhaps mislabeled as haiku?
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| Re: Zen by gothwalk |
17-Sep-02/6:01 AM |
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oooooh. that's so refreshingly nice compared to many others. a 10 for you!
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17-Sep-02/6:04 AM |
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| Re: Master Chef by Takay Shitar |
17-Sep-02/6:05 AM |
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a hunger inducing poem. I like my sausage burnt, too.
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17-Sep-02/6:08 AM |
I strongly believe that one should not judge a poet's personal life and attitudes based on the poem--that poetry can be as separate from the poet as it can be an intimate reflection of the inner soul.
That said- I still think this is crap and you should be ashamed of yourself.
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17-Sep-02/6:16 AM |
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very nice indeed. keenly perceptive and succinct.
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17-Sep-02/6:16 AM |
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very nice indeed. keenly perceptive and succinct.
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| Re: High Speed College Life by Modulo |
17-Sep-02/6:17 AM |
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17-Sep-02/6:18 AM |
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nicely stated. I too have grown sick of the overabundance of lark's vomit.
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| Re: #12 by mikejedw |
17-Sep-02/6:20 AM |
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| Re: Uninformed, pseudo-philosophical thoughts about existence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
17-Sep-02/7:07 AM |
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an effective, whimsical title.
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| Re: Hamptons by bondjedi |
17-Sep-02/7:09 AM |
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5-7-7 -- interesting (but possibly unnecessary) variation...
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| Re: Fire (a haiku series) by eviltwin |
17-Sep-02/7:10 AM |
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17-Sep-02/7:11 AM |
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been there. I had to rubber-band my thumb with a paper towel to apply direct pressure as I drove myself to the hospital for stitches.
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| Re: panic by <~> |
17-Sep-02/7:13 AM |
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excellent sense of mystery.
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| Re: my needs by itchiwitch |
17-Sep-02/7:17 AM |
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