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my needs (Haiku) by itchiwitch shone on by the moon
caressed by gentle breezes
need no more than this
Up the ladder:
Monkeys
Down the ladder:
Ode to Crushed Ice
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Posted: July 13, 2002 4:00 PM PDT; Last modified: July 13, 2002 4:00 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0555553 Overall Rank: 6800 Comments:
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deleted user @ 67.193.100.1
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13-Jul-02/4:11 PM
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I think this haiku is a very good one and is true to form.
I wan't more, turn the screw counter clockwisea
a bit vague--but nice
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