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What is Black (Haiku) by ivoryangie1 Black is my father
who was big a strong
black was my mother
who taught me right from wrong
black is not blue
black is not grey
black is not the color of sun light rays
black is me, who's mind is very strong
black is my color and that doesn't make me wrong.
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Posted: July 16, 2002 7:04 AM PDT; Last modified: July 16, 2002 7:04 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.3276463 Overall Rank: 13085 Comments:
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razorgrin @ 142.166.108.149
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16-Jul-02/7:21 AM
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that's not a haiku.
Before reading this astonishing poeme, I thought black was blue, that black was grey, that black was the color of sunlight and that if black was your color, you were wrong. Now I realise that those things just aren't true! Thanks ivoryangie1! Perhaps now I can get on with my life, free from the baggage of such predjudices.
add 'nd' to the 'a' between big and strong. Keep being proud.
nice freeform--perhaps mislabeled as haiku?
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