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Angels (Free verse) by Reuben Spiteri Singing of angels
From different worlds
Falling from heavens
Giving new births
Shouting of Mantras
a harmony of words
carried all over
cruising with birds
over the Himalaya
teaching everyone about Maya
teaching everything about freedom
breaking the ring,
in which we get attached
and cannot break free
.... until the singing of angels
Up the ladder:
A Separation
Down the ladder:
What is Black
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Posted: October 7, 2002 8:58 PM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2002 8:58 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.329863 Overall Rank: 13084 Comments:
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vulcan @ 80.242.3.81
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8-Oct-02/12:24 AM
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O very nice!I really enjoy reading your poems.feelings are expressed happily!That's effective.wish you more success.
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You've got a great name, Reuben Spiteri; almost as good as mine. Unfortunately, this poem is far from great. 2. There is nothing here to stir any kind of emotion in me. Bland as bland can be.
thks for ur compliments about my name.... de la bog
that's is the beuty of art.... someone see's a poem and gives it 10, someone elses sees it and gives it 1... nobody see's the same picture
Hmm, cliched, shallow, meaningless. Only joking. Unlike some of the bastards here I think all poetry is good as long as it means something to the author.
(Sorry I had to use you as an example.)
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