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A Separation

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Sep 2002 · Edited 23 Sep 2002 · 0 comments

Left on good terms, But Left, Shocked by painful reality of emotional theft Infecting my mental health Because your love turned out to be stealth Has He found your spot? You know its hard to find He doesn't look to bright; It might take him some time When we met you seemed so kind, But don't worry, that agreement I already signed Do you have fun like we did, with him? I'm sorry for the attitude i just Can't get you out of my system your love proved to be phoney like hair extentions And my love is now lonely like a room for detention Confrontation made itself A sudden reality with no preparation I guess deprivation of communication is the basis for This Separation.

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