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Angels (Free verse) by Reuben Spiteri

Singing of angels From different worlds Falling from heavens Giving new births Shouting of Mantras a harmony of words carried all over cruising with birds over the Himalaya teaching everyone about Maya teaching everything about freedom breaking the ring, in which we get attached and cannot break free .... until the singing of angels

Tarquin De La Bog 9-Oct-02/11:55 AM
You've got a great name, Reuben Spiteri; almost as good as mine. Unfortunately, this poem is far from great. 2. There is nothing here to stir any kind of emotion in me. Bland as bland can be.




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