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???? ___P??rf????t___G??l (Free verse) by da_dark_wan
Da perfect Gal There is no such thing we want a bit of dis, and a bit of dat we cant have it all from my eyes, there is only 1 perfect gal she always seems to know da way i think the way we talk, seems like we would never stop shes has those eyes, the ones that are only 4 me there are so many things about me that i dont know yet she allready sems 2 know Her touch, there is no way of explaining it she doesnt have to say a word, her touch says it all no words are required 4 dis conversation our lips will meet and a new conversation will start they way she smiles, brightens up da day i forget da problems i have, and look at the answers i have found the things we do doesnt reall matter as logs as we are together, thats all that matters i hope it lasts 4 eva i know it never will the end will come when my eyes open and i realise i was dreaming

Up the ladder: What is Black
Down the ladder: You Win

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.3276463
Overall Rank: 13091
Posted: September 10, 2002 4:42 PM PDT; Last modified: September 10, 2002 4:42 PM PDT
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[0] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 20-Dec-02/7:40 PM | Reply
you ever see best in show? "he likes soup" "i like soup" we could talk or not talk forever". we have lots in common.
[9] Emotionz @ 194.80.180.147 | 9-Jan-03/3:27 AM | Reply
Well even if it is a dream its a lovely one...
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