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What is Black (Haiku) by ivoryangie1

Black is my father who was big a strong black was my mother who taught me right from wrong black is not blue black is not grey black is not the color of sun light rays black is me, who's mind is very strong black is my color and that doesn't make me wrong.

Amelia 11-Sep-02/1:12 PM
add 'nd' to the 'a' between big and strong. Keep being proud.




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